Screenplay First Draft – DONE

So, it’s 12:28am and the only reason I’m posting something this late (early?) is because I just wrote “THE END” on the first draft of the screenplay I’ve been working on over the past few months.

I have to be honest, this is a big milestone for me. I’ve tried writing numerous screenplays over the years, but none of them got over the finish line. I’ve written a few novels to completion, nothing worth publishing yet, but for some reason I’ve never been able to complete a full draft of a screenplay.

Until now.

Feels good to finally reach this creative goal that has eluded me for years.

The working title is called “The Scout.” Here’s the brief elevator pitch I wrote up at the start of the project:

The Southern Province has been reduced to rubble and is now ruled by a merciless tyrant who is hell-bent on extinguishing anyone who gets in his way. Struggling to survive on the outskirts of the city, a refugee boy becomes a pawn in a rogue bounty hunter’s plot to subvert the new empire. In an adventure laced with fear and broken loyalties, Paulo is forced to trust the very one who gave him over to the brutal regime, as he races to save not only his own life, but the lives of his fellow refugees.

I’d probably revise it a bit now that I’ve through the first pass, but it’s a good summary of the main storyline.

Now, it’s time to let the manuscript sit for a week or so. Then, I’ll print it out and do my first read-through to begin doing structural edits. The good news is that I think the story is pretty sound, structurally. I don’t see a lot of major overhauling that I’ll have to do when I go back in for rewrites. I may have to add a scene here and there to explain some things a bit better or to set up a few scenes properly, but I have a feeling that the bulk of my editing will be layering in more world building and character development.

Anyways, time for some sleep!  I expect good dreams tonight after celebrating getting this one over the finish line. 🙂

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Deer Nibbling On Our New Pine Trees

Pine tree damage

Back in the early spring, we planted two rows of pine trees in the front pasture to try and establish a bit of a wind break and natural privacy fence. In all, I think we planted something like 80+ saplings around the property with about 50 or so of those as part of the wind break rows.

I headed out to give them some water during lunch and noticed that there are a handful of them that the deer have started nipping the tops off of.

Pine tree damage

We have a herd of about 8 or so deer that hang around our place, graze and bed down in our pastures during the night. I love the fact that I can walk out on to my back porch, shine the spotlight into the darkness, and almost always see the group drinking from the pond or munching on the sporadic patches of still green grass throughout the yard.

They know we aren’t a threat and even feel comfortable enough to come as close as 10 yards from the house, sometimes while we’re standing there on the porch. I consider it one of the perks of country life and appreciate all the opportunities my family have to see them bless us with their presence here on the homestead.

But sometimes their presence comes with a cost. When we planted the pine saplings, I knew it was a roll of the dice that some of them may be discovered and possibly chewed on by the herd. We made sure to plant extra knowing the risks. And if today’s survey is any indication, it looks like they have, in fact, discovered some of the trees.

Pine tree damage

That’s alright though. If I can get 50% of the trees to take root and make it past the deer’s curiosity, I consider it a win. I guess my thinking is that I’d rather lose a handful of trees to feed a couple hungry friends than not have the deer around at all. It’s a trade I’m happy to make.

The next stage the trees will have to make it through is when they are tall enough for the bucks come and start rubbing their antlers on them during rut season. But we’ll cross that bridge when we get there. 🙂